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Awesome improvement overall, great job!!
I mean I have nothing against stoic characters but I personally like the overall expression on your newest piece.
The newest piece also seems more cohesive as a whole and the colors are much more vibrant
Although details-wise, I like the second one the most. Then again, redrawing him with that design would be tedious on your part due to the sheer amount of details
They both look good in there own right though.
The one on the left is clearly more detailed, but in a cartoonist approach it's usually better to leave out the detail. I do like the cleaner linework in the left one, which can easily be implemented to the style on the right.
Additionally your colouring work on the right is better, due to the pallet you used. It's much more interesting than the flat colours in your previous.
TLDR; I like it!
Yeah, I was aiming for a sleeker look in the new one, since I'd rather have a simpler and bolder design than the detailed but somewhat excessive old design. Plus I wanted to try something a bit more stylized than what I usually do (in addition to being a bit too lazy to do precise linework, heh). You're awesome for taking the time out to comment on this!